Abandoned Mines History ZM09 map

[ibm5155]

Thanks Cruduxy for arrange and repair my Big text file :D

Abandoned Mines, created by:ibm5155
Inspired from Zombie Horde

Many years ago, several miners took resident in a mansion situated by a large cluster of mines.
James, a mentally unstable boy possessed by unspeakable things was among the miners families. Sadly, he comitted suicide at the age of 13...
His corrupted spirit however.. remained around haunting the miners who delve deep inside the mines.

Time passed and so did the story gets its own share of people twisting it to their own versions..
Eventually becoming some sort of urban legend no one bothers to take seriously.
A few drunken teenagers gone wild decided to ventre into the mines for some harmless night fun. But before
they even stepped inside the mine very loud whisperings filled the air.. whispers of a dreaming god..

Later that night, the teenagers went out of the mine. Stunned and unable to speak, their horrified parents
quickly took them home... but that wasn't the end.


One by one they passed out, decaying at a terrible rate.. one final laugher filled the air..
As the teenagers rose back to life, attacking everyone and eating most of them alive.

Eventually a young girl managed to trick the zombies into the mines, triggered the generator and ran out, locking the zombies in and
flooding the mines with lava.

Only one zombie managed to get out; the girl's mother managed to bite her earlier and the girl didn't realize
one bite, even a minor scratch is a kiss goodbye out of this life.


30 years later, explorers found the mansion and decided to rest in it before a long day of gold hunting.
The girl was still there, And so was the evil haunting the mines.. What unknown fate awaits those
unwary adventurers.....

THE END

[HeX9109]

I thought this was a thread regarding the history of Doom 2 map26

[The Toxic Avenger]

That or some actual abandoned mines.

[ibm5155]

I thought this was a thread regarding the history of Doom 2 map26

It´s about the ZM09 map from zombie horde mappack project called "abandoned mines"

[Guardsoul]

Rofl, last image should have been darker :P

[ibm5155]

Rofl, last image should have been darker :P

It was, but that camera filter on photoshop didn´t ended how I wanted =/

[Ivan]

3/10 wouldn't read again, bad grammar ruined it.

[Combinebobnt]

Translating huge blocks of text usually means errors. Have someone proof-read it after translation for you instead, that would be far better.

[ibm5155]

then google translator sucked
I need to be less lazy and do all the translation ¬¬

EDIT:text redone, I translated by myself, using all that I know, I may be a bit rusty on english, but at least, it´s better than the googled version :)

[Cruduxy]

Shameless big as hell rephrasing -with some tweaks here and there ;)-

Inspired from Zombie Horde

Many years ago, several miners took resident in a mansion situated by a large cluster of mines.
James, a mentally unstable boy possessed by unspeakable things was among the miners families. Sadly, he comitted suicide at the age of 13...
His corrupted spirit however.. remained around haunting the miners who delve deep inside the mines.

Time passed and so did the story gets its own share of people twisting it to their own versions..
Eventually becoming some sort of urban legend no one bothers to take seriously.
A few drunken teenagers gone wild decided to ventre into the mines for some harmless night fun. But before
they even stepped inside the mine very loud whisperings filled the air.. whispers of a dreaming god..

Later that night, the teenagers went out of the mine. Stunned and unable to speak, their horrified parents
quickly took them home... but that wasn't the end.


One by one they passed out, decaying at a terrible rate.. one final laugher filled the air..
As the teenagers rose back to life, attacking everyone and eating most of them alive.

Eventually a young girl managed to trick the zombies into the mines, triggered the generator and ran out, locking the zombies in and
flooding the mines with lava.

Only one zombie managed to get out; the girl's mother managed to bite her earlier and the girl didn't realize
one bite, even a minor scratch is a kiss goodbye out of this life.


30 years later, explorers found the mansion and decided to rest in it before a long day of gold hunting.
The girl was still there, And so was the evil haunting the mines.. What unknown fate awaits those
unwary adventurers.....

THE END

[ibm5155]

Shameless big as hell rephrasing -with some tweaks here and there ;)-

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*__* Wow thanks Cruduxy, It´s much better your version, and this mean I need again English class '-' (I stopped because of some dependencies classes from university =/)