Despair - Single Map

[Devastator]

Got bored, decided to start making a map. That's all
Criticism encouraged. Expect it to be done within 2-4 months.
Screenshots:

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[Ænima]

Use something other than just METAL__ textures.

[Tiger]

• Too many hallways - judging by the pictures.
• Lack of details, it seems plain.
• Assuming that you are going to focus on OpenGL, you need to make it worth using the OpenGL engine. Atleast I can only assume as you're using basic dynamic lighting.

This is all that I can think of right now.

[Catastrophe]

On top of what everyone else has said, the maps are a little too square and feel a bit cramped, aside from the big square room. Try using different shapes.

[Devastator]

Thanks a lot, I'm still trying to get a grasp on the concept of a nice and detailed map. I mean I know what that sort of map looks like, it's just that I'm still trying to get the placements right.

[Devastator]

Update bump.

[Mobius]

I like the window screenshot but otherwise is there a wad for me to download? It looks somewhat uneventful from the architecture alone unless there's more to it.