Invasion Map: Hellfire (Need Feedback)

[W1D3A55]

Well, a few weeks back I decided to start making a map that i might actually feel like releasing for public use. I'm a decent map maker, but I certainly look like crap compared to projects that are released both here and on ZDoom forums.

Anyways, so far this map is somewhat done. The layout is fairly linear considering it has almost no hiding areas and is practically a straight path, but has a decent amount of detail. This is only playable from 1-4 players, as any more would make this map a bit too easy. The monster spawns need a bit of tweaking, but are done for the most part. Overall, all I need to do left is some more detail, setup the player spawns after death, and a few other things.

I could use some criticism for this. Don't be too hard though as it is my first real public map ill release eventually.

Some Screenshots Here

First Room 1
First Room 2
First Room 3
Second Room
Last Room 1
Last Room 2
Last Room 3

[Llewellyn]

The outside area looks a little bland, try turning the outside edges into multi-level cliffs with objects on them.