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Post by Jigsaw » Sun Feb 17, 2013 4:47 pm

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Recently in the WDI servers, there were ideas about writing little stories which could have happened in WDI, or the reasons why the murders happened. Ithuno started it all when he wrote an essay about WDI for school. Me and Sicamore also have written our own ones, I'm going to share them here. This is a contest,Unfortunately we didn't receive any stories yet, so I don't think this would be a successful contest, but if anyone feels like writing a good WDI murder mystery, post it here! :)
Spoiler: They Must Not Know by Jigsaw (Open)
It was a cold night. Me and four friends were exploring an old, abandoned museum. We separated, and used our phones to stay in contact.
My hands were shaking as I ventured on a dark hallway. My flashlight emitted a dim, weak light. It was running low on battery.
Suddenly I heard rushing footsteps approaching me. A chill of terror ran down my spine. I was running as fast as I could. I ran out of the building and found a little tool shed. There was an old, rusty shovel inside. I took it and started to look around outside. The sky was swarmed with clouds, it was very dark. There was a bridge connecting two parts of the building, and an enormous statue depicting a bizarre creature with horns raising from its head, and a mechanical arm. It looked like it came from some old horror movie or video game, and had a small pool around it. It was frightening, but incredibly familiar too. I stared at it for like a minute, then I decided to continue exploring.

I entered the other side of the building. This place was giving me the creeps. It was a hallway with candelabras and alcoves in which they kept statues. They were empty, except one. It held a wax statue of a baby with his head mutilated, crying in pain. It was bone-chillingly realistic and disturbing. As I walked in the hallway, I suddenly heard a loud, terrifying scream, and a man was in front of me. I dropped my flashlight and swung my shovel. It hit something hard, and I heard a body dropping to the ground.

I was looking for my flashlight in panic. When I found it, I realized that the man was one of my friends. He was probably trying to scare me just for fun. He wasn't breathing. His head was still bleeding. Suddenly, his phone started to ring. I was mortified. They must not know what I've done. I took the phone and dropped it in the small pool around the bizarre statue outside. I went back to the body and examined it. In his left pocket, I found a knife with a serrated blade. I pocketed it and put the blood-covered shovel down. "I must show no evidence. They must not know..." My thoughts were going on like this, when I heard my phone. It was a text from one of the friends. It said "Come to the main gate."

Slowly I went back all the way I came, and found him standing at the gate. He was alone, and couldn't see me. He was expecting me to come from the other side of the courtyard. My heart was pounding rapidly as I approached him in perfect silence. I was right behind him. He was typing another message to me, saying "Hurry up!!". He never sent the message. All of a sudden, he felt the ice cold blade entering his back. I whispered to him "I'm sorry". I felt something I'd never felt before. I was furiously angry, shocked, and worried. "They must not know...." I entered the building from the front, and saw a hallway with an old mirror at the end. There were also hallways to the left and the right. They had paintings on the wall. I lifted some paintings. When I lifted the biggest painting, I found a secret corridor behind it. I quickly hid inside and went through the narrow, dark corridor. It was a great silence here. The corridor led to a tall room. On the table there were two round, metallic boxes with two short pipes coming out of each. I took one apart, and saw two shotgun shells inside the pipes, which served as barrels. I put it back together and took both of the traps. There was also a glass bottle, with a label saying "Bertholite.". I opened it up for a moment, and a little amount of gas came out. My lungs were burning as I smelled it. I took the bottle too and came out of the secret corridor. I felt like I was going crazy. "They must not know..." This thought was getting louder and louder, it tortured me and I couldn't take it anymore. I was running with my knife in my hand, and suddenly I felt I know this place. I knew where was I going. I set the shotgun traps to one of the doors at the mirror. I was standing there, laughing very hard. Then I phoned my friend to get over here as soon as he could. I saw the satisfied smile on my face in the mirror as his rushing footsteps were getting closer and closer to the rigged door. He kicked the door in, and in that moment, four loud gunshots shook the room. His body was blown 3 meters away, splattered and ugly. I looked into the mirror and laughed again. I shouted "They MUST know!!" and went to find my last victim. I went through a door to my left, and heard his footsteps already. He was coming to see what was that loud noise. I was laughing like crazy. I was standing at the closed door, waiting. As he opened it, I kicked him to the ground, stared in his eyes with a twisted grin, and slit his throat with a single cut. I was laughing and crying at the same time. I pulled my bertholite bottle, and broke it on his head. I felt the poison burning me with unbearable pain. I mumbled my last words "They must not know...", then let the deadly bertholite destroy my body.
Spoiler: The Menace of Echo by Sicamore (Open)
I never really liked vacationing. Especially if the vacation was in your own town and with the people you've known for over a decade. Don't get me wrong - I hate work, and that's essentialy why I booked us for a 1 week stay at Echo Ridge. However, I just felt like there could be something more exciting than staying at a wooden hut in the dead of Winter. I was wrong. What happened was not exciting at all. In fact, it was the most horrid thing one can imagine.

When we arrived there on January 25th (just a little short of New Years) the first view was just as expected: a rusty, cringy old cabin with nothing around it but ice and trees. There was also a lake, however it looked almost like the top layer was frozen, leaving the latter bobbing underneath. When we came inside, a nice and sweet old lady greeted us and showed us our rooms, first offering us a warm cup of cocoa of course. Pal Zeber, the only friend of mine who actually had a little respect, said thank you and then got up to head to his assigned quarters, which he said was a lakeview suite (but we well knew it was room 2). Ah yes, you could say things were going well. I even made myself familiar with the living room, where a nice soothing fire was burning evenly day in and day out, creating a bliss environment for my sleeping desires. I did indeed sleep afterall - for four straight hours, in fact, before I awoke to the yelling of It Huno, my campus roomate.
"Conspiracy! Mer! Mer!", the intoxicated fellow said as Pal and the others held him down.
"Where did you get that booze?", asked End Erman, noticing that the license sticker was still on it, which indicated that it was either stolen or bought elsewhere.
"Mer! Nou! Eye Enn Bee Four!", It shouted senselessly.
"Take him away," I said. "He's creating a scene!"
Pal and the others took him away to room 3, along with his bottles of booze, leaving me alone. Finally, I thought to myself - some sleep! I rested my head against the hard oak of the bench and slowly closed my eyes, trying to remember that this was vacation.

When I awoke the next morning, I smelled the crisp, attracting aroma of pancakes sizzling on the skillet in the kitchen, which was only a couple of meters away from my bench. From a distance I could make out the faces sitting at the room table: Pal, End, Jig, Roman. All my buddies who I've known since we graduated Z.A. Dronum high 2 years ago. Maybe this was going to be memory-worthy after all. Even It Huno, the drunken bastard that he was, was still one of my most loyal friends, someone who I could talk to whenever I pleased. I got up from the bench, fixing the hair which I had been lying on for 8 straight hours, and headed over to the table
"Rise and shine Sic", said Jig as I sat down, ready to endulge in my little world of syrup and fried goodness
"Where's It?", I asked, noticing that he wasn't present at the table.
"He had quite the hangover," said End. "We should go check on him after we eat."
I nodded and bit into my first pancake, feeling the warm dough pass through my throat.
"You know," I said, half-chewing, "It would be really nice to explore this place. I heard they have a boat house near here somewhere, as well as many scenic caves."
"I believe the boat house would be a good idea," commented Jig.
Everyone else nodded. And so it was decided - we would go to the boathouse. Finishing my last pancake, I got up from my chair and headed over to the coathanger, picking up my Konar Designed Fur Overcoat, which cost me 500 dollars on sale. Talk about the economy.
"Where you going Sic? What about It?"
I gave End the dirtiest look but complied.
"Fine. I'll go check on him."
I made my way down the hallway, where I noticed many waiter carts standing awkwardly along the side of the walls. These guys must really care about their clients. As I approached It's lakeview room, half expecting to hear intoxicated shouting sounds, I picked up a strong scent of what seemed like turpentine. What the hell was that?
Opening the door, I picked up a glimpse of something moving in the bakground. I then saw it, falling backwards and knocking over the waiter cart behind me.
"Holy shit!", I yelled as I loomed over the dead, pale body of It Huno, his hand grasping the same bottle he was drinking out of yesterday. There was no time. I had to get out of there as quickly as possible. I tripped on It's leg, knocking the bottle out of his hand and crashing face first into the carpeted cedar floor of Echo Ridge. Getting up and running down the hallway, I heard the shatter of glass followed by what seemed to be a searing flame. Could this be the end?

To be continued
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Post by Sicamore » Sun Feb 17, 2013 4:48 pm

This will be interesting. I can't believe I have gone so far as to write stories about Doom mods.
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Post by Ænima » Sun Feb 17, 2013 5:43 pm

Sicamore wrote: This will be interesting. I can't believe I have gone so far as to write stories about Doom mods.
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Post by Sicamore » Sun Feb 17, 2013 5:44 pm

Ænima wrote:
Sicamore wrote: This will be interesting. I can't believe I have gone so far as to write stories about Doom mods.
You'd be surprised.
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Post by W1D3A55 » Mon Feb 18, 2013 6:04 pm

Since this is a contest of sorts, what exacly will will be the prize (if any) for the winner?
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Post by Sicamore » Mon Feb 18, 2013 6:15 pm

W1D3A55 wrote: Since this is a contest of sorts, what exacly will will be the prize (if any) for the winner?
That will be decided. But you will get something! :)
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Post by W1D3A55 » Mon Feb 18, 2013 6:23 pm

Sicamore wrote:
W1D3A55 wrote: Since this is a contest of sorts, what exacly will will be the prize (if any) for the winner?
That will be decided. But you will get something! :)
Okay then. I guess I'll submit my story in a few days. (First time not writing a story for school).
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Post by PREPPER » Mon Feb 18, 2013 6:33 pm

I like this game wdi and all maps tell a story different with is good read this.

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Post by Sicamore » Mon Feb 18, 2013 7:37 pm

PREPPER wrote: I like this game wdi and all maps tell a story different with is good read this.
What?
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Post by Jigsaw » Thu Feb 21, 2013 2:08 pm

Please try to keep this thread clean from offtopic.

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Post by elmo » Sat Jul 20, 2013 5:24 pm

to me, i think sometimes the murd is a good person trying to escape the mob (alcatratz island for next wdi map someone?)
i was with my class in school, a sudden motor started running , my friend, bob the bob, said it was coming from the basement. We heard this gushing sound and went to investigate. We saw his body next to this saw , i tried to turn it off , but it was broken. I heard screams coming from the gym , i went over all my class mates were on the floor , with this green gas above them , i went in , my eyes were burning, i had to get out! i went on the intercom to signal everyone to come to room 3. I waited 30 mins and then i realized i was alone. then, i saw a janitor walking with a key towards the shelf , he dissapered when i walked in the room. i took the key and saw a safe. i opened it to find a shotgun. suddenly i saw a msg on the computer behind me it said "your dead". when i saw that , i look around the corner, to see the janitor with a knife in his hand and a m1 carbine on his back. i was shot in the chest , as i grasped for my gun while running , i felt a sharp stab in my back , and this was my last murder i would commit, until someone reads this paper , LOOK BEHIND YOU.
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Post by Archfile » Sat Jul 20, 2013 6:15 pm

It was a dark Halloween night, and a museum far away in the woods has been taken over by a group of people, turning the museum into a ultimate fuck-around bs place. Nobody had planned any program for the night. The worst part is, that EVERYONE had dressed up as astronauts.
This made people so angry that they started to "TK". Punching each other, calling each others by offensive names and yo mama jokes. they then started to arm themselves, getting shovels, pipes, wrenches, even shotguns and pistols. Someone even found a chainsaw lying around.
But the worst person was a guy who went so mad, that he created a red bar into his vision, and summoned a knife with his vast amount of rage, including a massive amount of deadly traps. He called the almighty server to change the music into "D_GUILE" and started his killing spree.
He went inside the museum, running and bashing his knife into peoples heads. Headshots aren't invented in the doom engine though, so fortunately nobody died. He then found out that the group of people had ran into a dead end. This was a perfect chance for murderer, as he used his shotgun traps. He set his traps into the ground, not knowing that they would face the murderer instead of the group. The murderer saw his mistake, but it was already too late: He was just a blood pool in the ground. The console started to fill up with "lol"'s and "rofl(mao)"'s, witch made the dead murderer sad and he "rq'd". The murderer got depressed and suicidal. The end.

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Post by elmo » Sat Jul 20, 2013 6:20 pm

what map is that
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Post by Archfile » Sat Jul 20, 2013 6:27 pm

elmo wrote: what map is that
WDI02.

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Post by CloudFlash » Sat Jul 20, 2013 7:43 pm

Today I was feeling a bit down, + I downloaded zandobando 1.1 and there weren't any servers with it yet, so I decided to whip out prologue to my upcoming airship map. Enjoy.
[spoiler]-=PROLOGUE=-
*BENG!*
'Holy fuck, Blue! I told you to not sip coffe while we fly through the storm!'
'Chill out, Green... Three engines are enough for me to land safely...'
'Argh, dammit Blue! Have you completely forgotten that we are shipping a special treasure!?'
Blue stretched his legs over some very important looking airship controls. A cup, which used to contain coffe, hanged limply from his fingers.
'Oh well. We are flying this whole 'special treasure' for two days now, and I still have no idea what it is.' Blue stretched his arms and yawned. 'Propably just some furfag who decided to go out from his closet or something like that. We have people like those every few months.'
Green tapped his foot on the floor few times. After a second he decided that this is too much for him, and he stood up, hands resting on his hips.
'This isn't a matter of laughing! If you weren't as stoned on the meeting as you were at the party, you would know what is this 'special treasure' I'm talking about! I bet that if you'd knew who do we have in our cargo bay, you'd shit your panties!'
This actualy caught Blue's attention. 'Yea, no. Try me.'
Green's mood darkened. They were shipping... ... ... HIM... And all Blue could do was just laugh at everything! And he didn't even try to look scared, no, he would act all bravado, even if the whole hell was about to break fucking free!!!
'You want me to try you? Fine, but first a quiz: who has been caught by the police in Torn City, about week ago?'
'You mean the Red Ripper? The guy who is said to have over 30 confirmed murders on his case?'
'Yes, EXACLY the Red Ripper. THAT Red Ripper, who has murdered seven people with a single fucking steel pipe, the same Red Ripper who massacred one guy with wooden plank so much even experts gagged at the sight of his mutilated face, the exact same Red Ripper who loaded a pregnant teenage girl with 45 crossbow bolts in the stomach... He so happens to be our 'special treasure'!!!'
The empty cup slipped from Blue's finger and crashed against the floor with loud shatter. Blue's jaws soon followed, and he stared on Green with mouth agape.
The silience was broken by another lighting booming just outside of the ship's cockpit.
'Wait, so you mean...'
'YES, I FUCKING MEAN EVERYTHING I WAS TRYING TO TELL YOUR FUCKING EMPTY EXCUSE OF A HEAD FOR FUCKING TEN MINUTES AND ALL YOU DONE WAS LAUGH AT ME ALL THAT WHILE COMPLAINING ABOUT ME OVER-'
Lighting decided that the atmosphere was starting to be a bit too tense. In desperate try to snuff out the incoming argument, it stroke directly at one of airship's remaining engines.
*BOOM!*
*BENG!*
'HOLY FUCKING SHIT WE GONNA D-'
'SHUT THE HELL UP GREEN! I have this under control!' Blue stood up and walked to a small telephone hanging on the wall near the door.
'Yo, Pink? Bring us some green tea and some antidepressants, Green is acting yet again.'
As Green desperately tried to keep his emotions under control, Blue waited patiently for a response. After fifteen seconds he put it down and picked up back again.
'Yo, Pink?'
The only response was silience.
Blue put phone back and picked it up once again.
'Yo?'
As if to confirm his fears, the light in the cockpit suddenly turned off. Green, after short analysis of the situation at hand, decided to faint.
'...*sigh* thanks for being helpful, Green. I just knew I could count on you...' Blue murmured. After a moment of staring at Green's peaceful expression, he sighed again. Then his head turned towards the door and the flashlight hanging right above to it in small glass case with 'IN CASE OF EMERGENCY BREAK THE GLASS' on it.
'Well, he ain't in no position to do the reconnaissance... Plus this cockpit is boring as hell without the lights on the panels.' said Blue after he used chair he sat on a while ago to break the glass. Flashlight worked pretty good, much to his expectations. After giving Green one last look of disapproval, Blue opened the door and stepped outside.[/spoiler]
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